on your knife.
and spread the peanut butter out.
9 fold the bread over and eat.
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ReplyDeletethis is a great example of instructional writing, rawe (excellet)! You have ordered your instructions and written them with detail, I like how you included taking of the lids in your instructions. Next time add in the equipment list before writing the instructions.
How did it go when you followed your instructions to make your sandwich? Did it taste yummy?
Miss Hart
hi miss Hart yes it was good
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ReplyDeleteYou have written some great instructions on how to make a sandwich. I like how you have numbered all your steps, this makes the instructions very easy to follow. Is peanut butter your favourite sandwich filling?
Sarah
Hi Sarah my fav used to be marmite now it is peanut butter
ReplyDeleteHi George
DeletePeanut butter is my favourite too, but it has to be crunchy!!
Sarah
Hi George my favourite spread is Nutella & jam. I like how you put instructions on how to make a sandwich. The instructions are easy to follow.
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